Prudence: Using a word from your 'Secrets' poem: It has been a 'privilege' to read your poetry anthology. It is great to be able to flick through your slides and read all of the wonderful poems.
Kia Ora, You really have expressed your feelings in your “Myrtle the Cat” poem. I can tell you love Myrtle, but he can get annoying. It looks like Myrtle is the cat of laziness, when she sees a chair though. I have the same problem with all the hair around the house!! But the “Silly Pets” is kind of upsetting in a way… Your art poem is true. It is a way to express your feelings. I know that art is a way to let yourself free and put your feelings on paper! Your “Isobella” poem makes you look like a poet yet you don’t know it!!! Autumn is a way to show colour and to give poems a lovable effect. In your “Secrets” poem it is really a privilege to be trusted with a secret isn’t it? Last thing, in your poem “Myrtle the Cat”, what did you mean by “But sometimes she gives me a fright.”??
Prudence: Using a word from your 'Secrets' poem: It has been a 'privilege' to read your poetry anthology. It is great to be able to flick through your slides and read all of the wonderful poems.
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Kia Ora, You really have expressed your feelings in your “Myrtle the Cat” poem. I can tell you love Myrtle, but he can get annoying. It looks like Myrtle is the cat of laziness, when she sees a chair though. I have the same problem with all the hair around the house!! But the “Silly Pets” is kind of upsetting in a way… Your art poem is true. It is a way to express your feelings. I know that art is a way to let yourself free and put your feelings on paper! Your “Isobella” poem makes you look like a poet yet you don’t know it!!! Autumn is a way to show colour and to give poems a lovable effect. In your “Secrets” poem it is really a privilege to be trusted with a secret isn’t it? Last thing, in your poem “Myrtle the Cat”, what did you mean by “But sometimes she gives me a fright.”??
ReplyDeleteWhen I'm sleeping Myrtle jumps up on my bed and she gives me a fright.
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