Things to consider:
- Why would you be put in this cell?
- How does it feel to be locked up?
- Is it possible to escape? Could you think of a plan?
- What is special about Alcatraz?
Finally I'm awake, I feel dizzy, I must of passed out. I stood up. I'm starting to see clearer, I look around and see that I'm not at home. I seem to be in a cell, in a prison. But why would I be in prison? Where am I? I would never do anything bad to get into prison in the first place.
I don't know how I could escape, I start searching my cell but I can't find a way to escape. I felt really dizzy , I fell to the floor and passed out instantly.
Ooooh that would be creepy! I hope you manage to escape. Good description of feeling confused and stressed out.
ReplyDeletePrudence, I am really impressed with how you have set out this blog post for your audience. You have included the prompt, key questions and then have gone on to write a descriptive 100 words. Our focus was a variety of punctuation this week..what can I see? Question marks, commas, full stops - what else could you showcase next time? Superb work, keep it up!
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